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Spider

Posted by ScreenMunched from Cardiff - Published on 27/02/2013 at 17:22
7 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing

  • Spider web

Spinning thoughts and dreams,
Chasing them down
With the delicacy and grace
Of a dove.

Winding legs
Clicking together,
Burning revenge,
Embracing loyalty.

Ignoring the shouts,
The screams of anguish,
Standing solitary alone,
Keeping spinning.

Round and round,
Glittering in the dust,
Abandoned,
Lost.

But powerful,
Playing with minds,
And winning,
Every time.

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7 CommentsPost a comment

CR3ATIV3

CR3ATIV3

Commented 39 months ago - 28th February 2013 - 11:10am

Awesome poem, really well written!

b00kw0rm99

b00kw0rm99

Commented 39 months ago - 28th February 2013 - 18:06pm

Love this poem, really good :D

ScreenMunched

ScreenMunched

Commented 39 months ago - 28th February 2013 - 18:55pm

Thanks. I love your name!!!! Xx

CrazeeG

CrazeeG

Commented 39 months ago - 28th February 2013 - 21:25pm

whoo , umm well i didnt really get it but its still good !!!!

Gator12

Commented 39 months ago - 1st March 2013 - 09:45am

Nice poem dude

ScreenMunched

ScreenMunched

Commented 39 months ago - 1st March 2013 - 17:46pm

@CrazeeG there wasn't much to get. It was just about a spider ,xx

Tiger-Lily24

Tiger-Lily24

Commented 38 months ago - 5th March 2013 - 20:33pm

Nice poem bad thing is I am terrified of spiders and so @CrazeeG I totes agree don't really get it either, but really like it XX

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