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Smile

Posted by ScreenMunched from Cardiff - Published on 03/12/2012 at 12:55
8 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing

  • Smile

This is my first poem I have written on TheSprout. I really hope you enjoy it and if you do, please leave a comment! Thanks guys!

What do you feel in a smile?
A flash of hope,
A sprinkle of love,
That warm tingling feeling after a kind gesture?

When someone smiles you feel a lifting sensation,
Knowing someone cares,
Someone who will reach out their hand to save you from that dark,
Dark,
Tunnel.

A smile could change a life,
It is a computer programmed to help,
Melt away tricky situations.

When someone smiles,
Forget. Everything.

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IMAGE: Carolyn_Sewell

8 CommentsPost a comment

b00kw0rm99

b00kw0rm99

Commented 41 months ago - 6th December 2012 - 19:04pm

This is a very good poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Really well written! :D

Tiger-Lily24

Tiger-Lily24

Commented 41 months ago - 7th December 2012 - 19:17pm

That is amazing!!!!!!! How can you right a poem like that???? I can't!!!!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed it so much!!!!!!!!!!

ScreenMunched

ScreenMunched

Commented 41 months ago - 8th December 2012 - 13:52pm

Thanks guys:)
Hopefully my other poem, Memories, will be up soon so be sure to check that out to ;) xx

Mimi1

Commented 41 months ago - 14th December 2012 - 09:39am

Really cool poem one of the best i heve ever read. hope you write some more like this.

CrazeeG

CrazeeG

Commented 41 months ago - 19th December 2012 - 12:25pm

cooooooooooool it was awesome!!!!! :) meep meep meep meep meep meep

LALA 2

LALA 2

Commented 41 months ago - 19th December 2012 - 12:29pm

Great poem! Lush! x

ScreenMunched

ScreenMunched

Commented 41 months ago - 19th December 2012 - 18:01pm

Thanks guys. @Mimi1 wow didnt know it was so good:D xx

ScreenMunched

ScreenMunched

Commented 40 months ago - 12th January 2013 - 20:17pm

I was wondering whether, I should write more like this...or not

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