Smile
This is my first poem I have written on TheSprout. I really hope you enjoy it and if you do, please leave a comment! Thanks guys!
What do you feel in a smile?
A flash of hope,
A sprinkle of love,
That warm tingling feeling after a kind gesture?
When someone smiles you feel a lifting sensation,
Knowing someone cares,
Someone who will reach out their hand to save you from that dark,
Dark,
Tunnel.
A smile could change a life,
It is a computer programmed to help,
Melt away tricky situations.
When someone smiles,
Forget. Everything.
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8 Comments – Post a comment
b00kw0rm99
Commented 41 months ago - 6th December 2012 - 19:04pm
This is a very good poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Really well written! :D
Tiger-Lily24
Commented 41 months ago - 7th December 2012 - 19:17pm
That is amazing!!!!!!! How can you right a poem like that???? I can't!!!!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed it so much!!!!!!!!!!
ScreenMunched
Commented 41 months ago - 8th December 2012 - 13:52pm
Thanks guys:)
Hopefully my other poem, Memories, will be up soon so be sure to check that out to ;) xx
Mimi1
Commented 41 months ago - 14th December 2012 - 09:39am
Really cool poem one of the best i heve ever read. hope you write some more like this.
CrazeeG
Commented 41 months ago - 19th December 2012 - 12:25pm
cooooooooooool it was awesome!!!!! :) meep meep meep meep meep meep
LALA 2
Commented 41 months ago - 19th December 2012 - 12:29pm
Great poem! Lush! x
ScreenMunched
Commented 41 months ago - 19th December 2012 - 18:01pm
Thanks guys. @Mimi1 wow didnt know it was so good:D xx
ScreenMunched
Commented 40 months ago - 12th January 2013 - 20:17pm
I was wondering whether, I should write more like this...or not