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Poem: Me

Posted by archifCLICarchive from National - Published on 11/08/2010 at 19:25
2 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing

  • bubblecatcher

Free me from this trap I’m in,
protect me from the rain.
Help me see just who I am,
shield me from their words.


I stand alone, though I’m surrounded,
it’s always been that way.
A crazy laugh a loud loud voice,
but it’s not real, it’s fake.


I make a joke a funny comment,
but that’s not how I’m feeling.
You’ll never know the real Gabriella,
besides you wouldn’t like her.


I may hide behind my sacred shield,
but one sword penetrates it.
Free me from this trap I’m in,
protect me from my rain.


Help me see just who I am,
shield me from my words.

Image: Bubble Catcher by Jeff Kubina

2 CommentsPost a comment

RoLouG

RoLouG

Commented 70 months ago - 13th August 2010 - 17:39pm

wow, really awesome :) you write poems so well!

Tom_Bevan

Tom_Bevan

Commented 68 months ago - 1st October 2010 - 13:42pm

Very thought provoking- really like this :)

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