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Poem: LifeTime

Posted by Tom_Bevan from Cardiff - Published on 15/04/2012 at 11:40
4 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing

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"Know how to live the time that is given you."
Dario Fo

My existence is odd
I’ve got
No reason,
No rhyme,
No phone, no pool, no pets,
No,
All I’ve got is time.

Our existence seems curious
Some are rich,
More dwell in grime.
But be it Mother, Brother, Lover,
All we have is time.

Your existence feels alarming
But put every thought aside
And life is made quite crystal
All you have is time.

All you are is what you do with it.

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Image - Ben Fredericson (xjrlokix)

4 CommentsPost a comment

Tom_Bevan

Tom_Bevan

Commented 49 months ago - 15th April 2012 - 21:10pm

* should say "more dwell in grime", as oppose to "most", my mistake. Doesn't make any difference I know but hey, I'm picky.

Sprout Editor

Sprout Editor

Commented 49 months ago - 16th April 2012 - 08:13am

Hi tommy b, I've changed it for you :)

emb789

emb789

Commented 49 months ago - 19th April 2012 - 04:49am

This is really fantastic, good job!

SamuelPatterson

SamuelPatterson

Commented 49 months ago - 19th April 2012 - 11:21am

I've yet to come across a poem of yours I don't like tommy! Good job :)

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