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Poem: Horses (For Ponylover664)

Posted by psychoblob from Cardiff - Published on 22/11/2013 at 17:23
6 comments » - Tagged as People

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The Spirit of the Horse,
Shown in the glint of an eye,
A teardrop, a whisper,
So beautiful, it makes one cry.

A drop in a space full of blazing emotions,
The Spirit of Horse stops all in its tracks,
All the anger, passion, sadness and love,
After hearing that spirit, begins to crack.

The Horse is a creature of beauty,
Of love, and is wise,
It is so spiritual and meaningful,
But because of man, it is shy.

Man treats spirit badly,
Ripping and tearing the seams,
The veil into spirit is broken,
So we will never know what it means.

Apart from a select few,
The ones who can lift that veil,
And see the clarity of soul and spirit,
Into horses' dreams and sunsets, he will sail.


Photo Credit: david.ian.roberts via Compfightcc

6 CommentsPost a comment



Commented 30 months ago - 23rd November 2013 - 18:05pm

thx psycohoblob



Commented 30 months ago - 24th November 2013 - 08:49am

That was the best poem I have ever heard! It makes me wanna cry?! Good job. It really is amazing to read. Maybe you should write poems and be a poet when youre older!
I am in your school!



Commented 30 months ago - 25th November 2013 - 12:21pm

Wooaahh! bookathon's right, you should really be a poet when you're older!



Commented 30 months ago - 25th November 2013 - 13:05pm

I really like this poem. good job :)



Commented 30 months ago - 28th November 2013 - 12:34pm

OK... seeing your recent works, I've changed my mind. You should be an artist when you're older!!!!!


Commented 27 months ago - 6th February 2014 - 12:36pm

its really good better than i could ever do in my whole life

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