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Poem: Alas She Goes

Posted by gesture from Rhondda Cynon Taff - Published on 15/04/2010 at 13:59
2 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing

  • alasshegoes

Alas she goes with tears down her cheeks
dreaming of him every time she sleeps
I want to make her happy, I want to be her lover
but I can't make her happy she wants to love another

I'll do everything to show her how good we might be
make her smile, make her laugh, show her what I see
so if she reads this then hopefully she'll smile
or if she doesn't like it she'll give me time to reconcile

but now, I'll finish this in a poetic and romantic way,
and promise me you'll remember this until your dying day
no matter if the distance between us is near or far
I'll still find a way to remind you how beautiful you are.

Photo Credit: "ˈhrt-ˌbrāk" by Chelsea Oakes

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gesture

gesture

Commented 74 months ago - 16th April 2010 - 08:07am

thanks Sambow, I appreciate it. Glad someone's reading them :)
Sarah, thanks to you too
Georgii, thank you too :)

gesture

I suppose I'll meet some of you at the meeting at the end of the month?

Sprout Editor

Sprout Editor

Commented 74 months ago - 16th April 2010 - 09:57am

That's really beautiflul and so true. I love the last line :)

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