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My Best Mates

Posted by Tiger-Lily24 from Cardiff - Published on 01/01/2013 at 14:14
10 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing, People

  • My Best Friends

This is my first time writing an article on TheSprout, but all my closest friends have done it, so I thought, 'Why not?' and here I am! I would appreciate any mistakes that I have made being written in the comments section on this page. Anyway, as it was my friends that gave me this idea, I thought I'd write it about them. Don't worry, all my mates out there reading this, I won't use names or personal info and please, no one take any offence from this, as they are all compliments. Thank you!

Not trying to be big headed,
But I have many friends,
I don't know which I like the most,
They're all the best!

There's this one girl that I know,
She's the smartest girl,
She knows all her times tables,
Or at least most of them.

Then two more,
Quite brainy too,
But musically talented, no question,
And kind of crazy as well.

Another one, artistically great,
She can draw people of all shapes and sizes,
In perfect detail,
Without a doubt.

There's more to come, another three,
Kind, caring and funny,
Always here to help me out,
Especially with homework!

One more bezzie,
I've known her most of my life,
She's crazy too, but so kind and nice,
She'll stick with me until the end.

There are so many that I can't count them all,
Best friends that I'll always remember,
They're there for me no matter what,
Always there when I'm in need,
They light up my day,
And I enjoy every second.

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10 CommentsPost a comment

ScreenMunched

ScreenMunched

Commented 40 months ago - 5th January 2013 - 17:39pm

hey, its charlotte. Really cool peom! Lol, am I any of them?? x

b00kw0rm99

b00kw0rm99

Commented 40 months ago - 6th January 2013 - 18:22pm

I loved this poem!! I thought it was really sweet and a really nice thing for your friends to read. I hope you write more because I really enjoyed reading this. No improvements! Xx

CrazeeG

CrazeeG

Commented 40 months ago - 7th January 2013 - 22:27pm

Heeeyyy i love this poem thnx for writing !!! Hope u write some more !!!
Am i the crazy one ??? :)??? Hee hee xxx

Tiger-Lily24

Tiger-Lily24

Commented 40 months ago - 10th January 2013 - 19:59pm

Lol yeah I think that CrazeeG and ScreenMunched know who they are in this article (hahahahahahaha) thanks guys i appreciate the comments XX

MediaManiac

MediaManiac

Commented 40 months ago - 11th January 2013 - 09:33am

really good poem!!!!

<3 JB+1D

<3 JB+1D

Commented 40 months ago - 11th January 2013 - 09:39am

my freindcan do all thatstuff!!!!

moll_teaser

moll_teaser

Commented 40 months ago - 11th January 2013 - 09:39am

i have a friend exactly lik that...shes ma bestie xxx shes really talented at writing and i luv herrr xxx

<3 JB+1D

<3 JB+1D

Commented 40 months ago - 11th January 2013 - 19:06pm

La la la, is not

1D FOR LIFE

1D FOR LIFE

Commented 40 months ago - 12th January 2013 - 10:36am

My best friends r all like this and they have both comented on this. Great poem

twilightcrazedxxx

twilightcrazedxxx

Commented 40 months ago - 31st January 2013 - 21:22pm

I absolutely loved reading this xxx It's nice to know when people have such nice friends xxx I think to make this go a step further, perhaps try and rhyme it?

Rhyming might not be your thing but I really think it might improve it!

Hope you give it a try!
xxx

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