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Posted by ScreenMunched from Cardiff - Published on 10/12/2012 at 15:36
6 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing

  • Memories Cut Wire

Hi guys! This is my second poem. It is quite emotional, not sure where it all came from! Hope you enjoy it!

Swirling wind dusting tears from my eyes,
My all-knowing, old eyes,
That have seen too much,
Too soon.
Of pain, suffering and death,
Of poverty and starvation.

Swirling wind,
All around,
Can't see anything clearly,
All a blur, a distant memory,
A nightmare.

More tests, more scans, more nurses,
A circuit, not willing for someone to break the wire,
To finally dispose of me,
I cut the wire.


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Commented 41 months ago - 19th December 2012 - 12:27pm

Woah Charl that is deeeeeeeeeeeep!! Well done xxx
Abbie :)



Commented 41 months ago - 19th December 2012 - 12:28pm

i loved it !!!!!
merry christmas doobe doo bibi



Commented 41 months ago - 19th December 2012 - 12:38pm

This is a really good poem. Can't say I enjoyed reading it because, as you pointed out, it is very sad. Don't get me wrong it's a good poem, but so sad. Write happy next time ;) xx



Commented 40 months ago - 4th January 2013 - 15:05pm

Thank Yooouuu! I wrote Christmas and Shadows too so I would be reeaaallly happy if you looked at them too!!
@bookworm yeah I know it is sad but i dont really care coz lots of poems are:)



Commented 40 months ago - 6th January 2013 - 18:39pm

I agree with b00kw0rm99 in a way coz its a kinda depressing poem but i like depressing poems so i really enjoyed it! XX



Commented 40 months ago - 12th January 2013 - 20:18pm

@tiger-lily24 ok, I'll write happy next time, glad you enjoyed it, but your poem is amaizng!!! :O

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