Let Me Walk With You
Can I believe in you?
Because, I am weak and seeing you gives me strength.
I had always cried and gave up so easily before you came along.
But seeing you work so hard, watching you win everyone over with your words.
It made me believe that, even if only a little, I could change myself.
I almost went the wrong way in life, but you, you showed me just how great I could become.
I began to watch you. Chase after everything you did.
Watched how you were able to help everyone else,
It gave me the strength I needed.
I want to catch up with you, want to simply walk with you.
I want to understand you.
You changed me when I was unable to change myself.
Your smile saved me from the darkness,
So, please, let me grab on to your hand.
Let me believe in you, so that I may be stronger.
Stronger than I am now.
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5 Comments – Post a comment
x_molz_x21
Commented 67 months ago - 2nd November 2010 - 15:29pm
very good
Tom_Bevan
Commented 67 months ago - 3rd November 2010 - 16:11pm
wow, this is awesome :) really makes you think :D
tommyb likes this (true fb style there)
emb789
Commented 67 months ago - 3rd November 2010 - 20:23pm
*ahem*
THIS IS NOTHING LIKE HINATA'S CONFESSION TO NARUTO IN THE POPULAR MANGA AND ANIME SERIES, NARUTO SHIPPUDEN! NOT IN THE SLIGHTEST! NOPE! NO WAY! OF COURSE NOT!
Unhinged
Commented 65 months ago - 9th January 2011 - 23:53pm
THAT MOVED ME, that was brilliant!!
abhijanb
Commented 64 months ago - 26th January 2011 - 15:49pm
that's quite deep and moving mate. nice work!