Welcome to The Sprout! Please sign up or login


Posted by ScreenMunched from Cardiff - Published on 11/02/2013 at 18:04
4 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing

  • Justice

Life never gives out gifts,
God has provided us with enough,
What he thought would satisfy us,
But did it?

He wishes no greed upon us,
He wanted us to be free,
No hard decisions, no deaths, no wars.

But we just had to disobey,
Just so we could be right,
Our arguments heard,
Our weapons released.

And now where will we be?
Now justice has been sucked up by the Devil,
Now that every river is poisoned red by man's own blood,
Now that every parents' child has been banished and avoided.

Every friend has turned against,
Every sibling has fought,
But will we continue to wreck humanity?

Articles Â» Categories Â» Creative Writing

Photo Credit: â–“â–’â–‘ TORLEY â–‘â–’â–“ via Compfight cc

4 CommentsPost a comment



Commented 39 months ago - 13th February 2013 - 13:38pm

O. M. G.
That. was. immense.
Enough. said. xx



Commented 39 months ago - 22nd February 2013 - 12:03pm

that was very dramatic ...



Commented 39 months ago - 23rd February 2013 - 10:32am

Thanks. Yes it was pretty dramatic xx



Commented 38 months ago - 5th March 2013 - 21:03pm

yeah intense........... XX

Got something to say?

You must be logged in to post comments on this website.

Login or Register.

Please take a few minutes to complete this survey. It will help us find out how you use the website so we can keep improving it for you. Everyone who completes the survey will get the chance to win £50.