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A Cloud's Point Of View...

Posted by Faymondo:) from Cardiff - Published on 07/02/2011 at 16:15
3 comments » - Tagged as Climate, Creative Writing, Environment

  • Cloud Face

I have a dream,
A dream that will make our world healthier,
A dream that could make the world flow,
Like a rhythm dancing in between notes of music.

I know that I am only particles of dust and water,
But from my view in the sky,
I can see what everyone is doing,
To destroy the Earth of which there is no CD copy.

We are causing mayhem, chaos and trouble.
Even two sprays a day is making me fade,
I’m losing my volume and bounce,
My appearance is growing greyer as every hour passes,
My drive and vitality is withering away,
As well as the Earth’s ozone layer.

I look down on the Earth with a sad face,
As the people down below will regret what they are doing.
As the world slowly dies,
We die with it,
A slow, irreversible death.

If we don’t change now,
Then we are not worthy enough to have such a beautiful world.
This is climate change,
And you may not know,
But it can be defeated.

Do something today that the Earth will benefit from,
I’m sure we don’t want to die,
Knowing that we have destroyed the main reason for our existence,
Would you?

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IMAGE: Untitled by Bert Kommerij

3 CommentsPost a comment

Tom_Bevan

Tom_Bevan

Commented 64 months ago - 7th February 2011 - 16:57pm

great stuff fay, good to see u back on here writing again :)
this is my 'environmental news' which I will write up on when the times arises :
http://www.walesonline.co.uk/news/wales-news/2011/02/01/tom-s-taking-on-climate-change-champion-role-91466-28090217/

SamuelPatterson

SamuelPatterson

Commented 64 months ago - 7th February 2011 - 19:38pm

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. It's nice to see a poem about environmental issues. You tapped into some key aspects and views. Thanks. Again, great poem :)

Faymondo:)

Faymondo:)

Commented 64 months ago - 10th February 2011 - 09:52am

Thanks:) I wanted to write something about climate change, without sounding like a ranting environmental person...it's something I feel strongly about. Thanks for the comments again...:D

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