A Chocolaty Love Story
Hello. Me again. As the Easter holidays are now over, I thought I'd write a little poem. I hope you enjoy it!
Your silvery foil sparkles like the sea,
But the chocolate inside looks much better to me.
Your chocolaty shell melts so quick,
I'll have to give my fingers a lick.
Such delicious secrets are held inside,
Once you're open there'll be nowhere to hide.
After Easter, you'll have to go,
We've had a great time together though.
I'm sorry, Easter egg, the end is here,
It's time to say goodbye until next year.
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b00kw0rm99
Commented 37 months ago - 10th April 2013 - 15:57pm
Haha, that's amazing, it's really funny, but it's actually a really good poem!! Keep writing! ^.^ x
CR3ATIV3
Commented 37 months ago - 11th April 2013 - 12:36pm
This is a really good! Wrie more poems and stories because they're soo amazing
furbywomble
Commented 37 months ago - 11th April 2013 - 12:37pm
really good!!!! keep up with the good work! x
Something Sporty
Commented 37 months ago - 11th April 2013 - 12:44pm
This story is great well done! Please write another one :)
JustNotNormal
Commented 37 months ago - 11th April 2013 - 17:00pm
Thanks guys!!! Alone part 2 will be here soon (not much happens. It's kind of like an in between bit for parts 1&3.)
twilightcrazedxxx
Commented 37 months ago - 12th April 2013 - 19:04pm
This is funny and amazing! Your profile picture is amazing! And part 2 of Alone is amazing! Keep it up! xx
JustNotNormal
Commented 37 months ago - 13th April 2013 - 09:45am
@twilightcrazedxxx thanks so much!
spunkytractorwoman
Commented 30 months ago - 15th November 2013 - 09:35am
This poem touched my heart.