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A Chocolaty Love Story

Posted by JustNotNormal from Cardiff - Published on 10/04/2013 at 14:28
8 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing, Festivals, Food & Drink

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Hello. Me again. As the Easter holidays are now over, I thought I'd write a little poem. I hope you enjoy it!

Your silvery foil sparkles like the sea,
But the chocolate inside looks much better to me.

Your chocolaty shell melts so quick,
I'll have to give my fingers a lick.

Such delicious secrets are held inside,
Once you're open there'll be nowhere to hide.

After Easter, you'll have to go,
We've had a great time together though.

I'm sorry, Easter egg, the end is here,
It's time to say goodbye until next year.

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8 CommentsPost a comment

b00kw0rm99

b00kw0rm99

Commented 37 months ago - 10th April 2013 - 15:57pm

Haha, that's amazing, it's really funny, but it's actually a really good poem!! Keep writing! ^.^ x

CR3ATIV3

CR3ATIV3

Commented 37 months ago - 11th April 2013 - 12:36pm

This is a really good! Wrie more poems and stories because they're soo amazing

furbywomble

Commented 37 months ago - 11th April 2013 - 12:37pm

really good!!!! keep up with the good work! x

Something Sporty

Commented 37 months ago - 11th April 2013 - 12:44pm

This story is great well done! Please write another one :)

JustNotNormal

JustNotNormal

Commented 37 months ago - 11th April 2013 - 17:00pm

Thanks guys!!! Alone part 2 will be here soon (not much happens. It's kind of like an in between bit for parts 1&3.)

twilightcrazedxxx

twilightcrazedxxx

Commented 37 months ago - 12th April 2013 - 19:04pm

This is funny and amazing! Your profile picture is amazing! And part 2 of Alone is amazing! Keep it up! xx

JustNotNormal

JustNotNormal

Commented 37 months ago - 13th April 2013 - 09:45am

@twilightcrazedxxx thanks so much!

spunkytractorwoman

Commented 30 months ago - 15th November 2013 - 09:35am

This poem touched my heart.

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