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Poem: Poppy Day

Postiwyd gan psychoblob o Caerdydd - Cyhoeddwyd ar 15/11/2013 am 10:55
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  • Poppy Day

We remember those who died for us. The ones who gave their lives for us. 

The ones that were in danger for us. Those who were so brave.

We remember those who stood alone. We remember those who fought alone. 

We remember those who cried alone. Those who suffered more.

We remember those who were shot for us. The ones that left their family for us.

The ones who died on the field for us. Those who we salute today.

We remember those who took a bullet in war. 

We remember those who fired a gun in war. We remember those who witnessed death in war. Those who deserve respect.

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7 CommentsPostiwch sylw

dirty

dirty

Rhoddwyd sylw 30 mis yn ôl - 15th November 2013 - 15:35pm

Is this just about WWI and WWII, or about all members of the armed forces? IE the British Marine who executed an Afghan militant and was sentenced to life in prison- does he deserve my respect? Or any of the others who have committed war crimes?

twilightcrazedxxx

twilightcrazedxxx

Rhoddwyd sylw 30 mis yn ôl - 15th November 2013 - 16:54pm

I love this. So many people do not acknowledge Remembrance Day anymore and that really upsets me. Thanks for this! x

milltonthepony

Rhoddwyd sylw 30 mis yn ôl - 15th November 2013 - 17:27pm

thats an amazing poem hope you go on and write loads more xx

psychoblob

psychoblob

Rhoddwyd sylw 30 mis yn ôl - 15th November 2013 - 17:56pm

thanks guys! x

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Iheartselenagomez$$

Rhoddwyd sylw 30 mis yn ôl - 16th November 2013 - 09:32am

Well done! lovely poem! x

psychoblob

psychoblob

Rhoddwyd sylw 30 mis yn ôl - 18th November 2013 - 16:32pm

well, to be honest, I guess its just about all the people affected by war! Wars an ugly thing, so I just thought I'd show my respect to those who do everything for us by writing a simple poem! I didn't mention anything about WWI or WWII, it's just simply about war!

ponylover664

ponylover664

Rhoddwyd sylw 30 mis yn ôl - 20th November 2013 - 10:28am

i wish i could write poems as well as this

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